Sweet Revenge
Warm day, soft breeze. White clouds, cerulean sky.
Flowers' scent, nature's hum.
Mellow wine, sharp cheese, sweet fruit, fresh honey.
Lovers savor the day, the food, each other.
Intensified hum. Pure black, vibrant yellow. No escape.
Honey theft revenged.

Flowers' scent, nature's hum.
Mellow wine, sharp cheese, sweet fruit, fresh honey.
Lovers savor the day, the food, each other.
Intensified hum. Pure black, vibrant yellow. No escape.
Honey theft revenged.

Three Word Wednesday. is a meme that challenges writers to create something using three selected words. This week's words are escape, hum and vibrant. Click on the link to view other entries or submit your own.
Loved the ending to this. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful twist to this.
ReplyDeleteThis was rich with imagery...a treat to my senses. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteNicely done....
ReplyDeleteWonderful my friend. I love the ending. I get a real buzzing sensation with this :)
ReplyDeleteOuch guess that will teach them! :)
ReplyDeleteLaughing. You had my mouth watering right up to the last line. Great finish.
ReplyDeletehehe! Yummy, and witty. :-D
ReplyDeleteDelightful!
ReplyDeleteThis made me chuckle...the image was perfect.
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Love the ending! I've often wondered if the bees think that way. Honey tastes so good, I wouldn't be surprised.
ReplyDeleteants and bees make perfect companions to a lovely meal with a lover....
ReplyDeleteThis one is very clever! And no doubt true!
ReplyDeleteGreat ending and a very fitting choice for a title!
ReplyDeleteThat's a beautiful piece of verse. Nice job!
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